tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343625925902939495.post219915863619781034..comments2023-10-08T21:51:28.284-07:00Comments on Magnolias and Men M/M Romance With a Southern Accent: What's in a Word? It's All About the FeelEden Wintershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02325723874232660290noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343625925902939495.post-2607479387469794322013-05-19T03:53:55.137-07:002013-05-19T03:53:55.137-07:00Sometimes it's difficult to capture deep POV, ...Sometimes it's difficult to capture deep POV, but so, so worth it. Eden Wintershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02325723874232660290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343625925902939495.post-80381230303851418942013-05-18T19:31:44.253-07:002013-05-18T19:31:44.253-07:00A wise words for any author & it makes a huge ...A wise words for any author & it makes a huge difference. I will be pulling Made in China back to auto critter it & ensure I give the deeper POV.<br />Hugs, Z.Z. Allorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14717073334637703737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343625925902939495.post-22047895673611513112013-05-17T17:59:12.750-07:002013-05-17T17:59:12.750-07:00Feel, move, walk, thought(the next installment), l...Feel, move, walk, thought(the next installment), look, they all stand out to me, as those I beta for know. Is it a personal taste issue? Yes. Are sentences stronger when these words are addressed? My own certainly are. <br /><br />And hugs on the comment thing. Eden Wintershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02325723874232660290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6343625925902939495.post-8404629042032797492013-05-17T15:23:04.601-07:002013-05-17T15:23:04.601-07:00I always thought "move" was the dullest ...I always thought "move" was the dullest verb, except when shifting your household, butnow I think feel is. Must go on a search and destroy mission in the WIP! -- Pam, who isn't being allowed to comment by blogger grrAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com